As she paced the room she heard someone say her name
Ashley I came as fast as I heard there was a lot of traffic 
 Oh! I didn't hear you come in the doctor said we don't have long that we better say our goodbyes 
 What No No this cant be happening the Doctor said that gracie would be able to come home in a couple of days that there was no more cancer 
 I don't what were gonna do I can't she burst into tears
 Come here he motioned her to sit by him on gracie's bed as they sat there watching little gracie breath they cried untill they heard her say
 Mommy and Daddy don't cry for me cause pretty soon i'll be in heaven with the angels and you take good care of sugar for me and tell her not to miss me to bad tell her i'm sorry i'll wont be riding her any more but I bet Jesus has some horses up there I can ride I love yall and goodbye mommy and daddy oh and daddy remember I'll always be your little cowgirl

It's kinda crappy cause I wrote it on the spot but anyway here is my sad story

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Punch the Keys! | A Writing Group

Punch the Keys! | A Writing Group

This group is for all you Bibliophiles (lovers of books), Graphophiles (lovers of writing), and Logophiles (lovers of words).
The idea of this group is for anyone who wants to, to have fun writing–while at the same time honing your skills as a writer. Or, if you're more of a reader, share sets based off your favorite books or favorite movies based off a book.
-Once a week there will be "Word of the Week" set, where you may practice writing a story for a few minutes while incorporating the word of the week. (If you would like to be on the tag-list for this activity let me know.)
-For 2 weeks we will have a "Writing Practice" Contest where a prompt will be provided and you may write a short story based on that prompt for 15 minutes.
-After that, for another 2 weeks there will be a "Writing Contest" (more details will be provided in the contest)
-"Drabble Challenge Tag": this is a fun activity where you can be challenged to write a short story in 100 words. (Check out this set for more details:
"Word of the Week":
NOTE: Please keep the rating of your stories at K+—T/Gen—Teen
If you have any suggestions let me know!
#punchthekeys #writing #write #writinggroup
(group created: 4/6/14)

When things go left, go write.

When things go left, go write.

This group is welcome to ALL writers. Whether it's one shots, novels, short stories, fanfictions, poems..ect. You can even advertise your RolePlays here! But don't post actual RPs. I will delete them. Enter this group. Be creative. Enter contests and when things go left....GO WRITE!


Short and Sweet

Short and Sweet

7 sets from three members. Ended two years ago.
Enter any short story or one shot new or old. It can be fanfictions and original. Good luck! :3

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